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  • Title: hhxiii: The Archer ->
  • Artist: in2y
  • Description:

    ~S.S.

    Aiming at the mark that caught my eye
    Sending my arrow up in the sky
    Shimmering in the sunset as it went
    Deadly will it be as I intend
    Seeing down the endless pass
    When my arrow drops at last
    Plunging out of the air to the ground beneath
    The arrow so fast the mark so slow
    Piercing it in a destructive blow
    The mark standing still, in choice
    Death is upon me said his voice
    Closing his eyes weary of the flight
    And saw the day turns into night

    have fun :)
    insp by: Vespers' Core

  • Date: 06/24/2012
  • Tags: hhxiii archer
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  • Desthild - 06/26/2012
  • I agree with Umioko 75% and with your response a 25%.
    Those were my first thoughts when I see this.
    I personally love the colors, face and outfit(messy detailed), but when you came down to the bottom part it seems more simple than the rest of the avatar. This one have an incredible potential, so I suggest for you to reach it. You should re-submit this one, but with a better bottom part, one that could match the entire avatar.
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