- Title: Lost Wanderer
- Artist: xein
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Description:
Read Weiss awakes by the foul smell of blood. A sharp pain surge through his head. He slowly stood up.
Before his eyes was a scene of an afterwar. Corpses piled on each other and blood like puddles of water.
He can not remember what happened to him but he knew something was wrong.
Read quickly scarvenged for any usable weapon in order to protect himself. Only to find something he feels familiar with, a katana.
A sudden cracking sound came from behind. Read's heart began beating faster. - Date: 09/17/2006
- Tags: cape katana lost
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Comments (7 Comments)
- SeuYang - 09/17/2006
- No.
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- Suits - 09/17/2006
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Very interesting, and yes a cliched story but why
mess with a good plot device? 8. - Report As Spam
- -student-Hermione Granger - 09/17/2006
- ok..
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- Red Tetsusaiga - 09/16/2006
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I ordinarily don't comment on the descrptions but
your writing skills need work. You switched
tenses several times in that description.
Now,
back to the avatar... nice. Very nice. 9/10 - Report As Spam
- itune - 09/16/2006
- 7/10.
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- p i n k 28 - 09/16/2006
- biggrin
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- Hellevica - 09/16/2006
- 4/10
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