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- | Submitted on 07/01/2007 |
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- Title: The Ballance
- Artist: _-Crystal_-_Frost-_
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Description:
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Once there was a mortal woman whose looks drove men to insane lust and passion. The numbers grew larger the numbers grew and her body became unpure. The spirits watched and were disgusted by the woman's actions and took away her face. But this didn't stop her, she grabbed a mask and played the part of a mysterious creature and continued on with her unpure ways. Eventually the spirits gave the woman another punishment, and this one finally got to her... They took away her soul - Date: 07/01/2007
- Tags: scale beauty ballance elegantbluegloves blackstockings
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Comments (7 Comments)
- HighLord of Hell - 07/01/2007
- nice.
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- OFFICER HOUSER - 07/01/2007
- cool
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- thiefmasta10 - 07/01/2007
- its alright
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- Ambyre89 - 07/01/2007
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Okay, I ranted about the story, now the avi. I
think she fits in with what you wanted. The
elegent blues and the golden hair hint at her
looks that drove men insane, the zodiac of ocurse
was excellent for the balance. the mask not only
served the purpose, but covered the balance part
as well. the cloud was a nice touch. plus, she
looks almost like she is a sad empty being going
through her punishment. Kudos - Report As Spam
- x-Allie-x-Neko-x - 07/01/2007
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i like it, the avi and the story but to be honest,
the story doesn't particularly go with the avitar,
good try but to be honest i dont think the avi
looks lustingful at all, if you wore skimpy things
and had less childish hair then yeah, it would
work. - Report As Spam
- Ambyre89 - 07/01/2007
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I rather enjoyed the story. it wasn't something
slapped togeather or all "this is Thorn, she is
doomed forever to walk the night. she is sad" She
got what was coming, and quite frankly, if that
was written on the back of a book (without
spoiling the ending, of course) I would want to
read it ^_^ - Report As Spam
- Evil_Snuffkin - 07/01/2007
- pretty darn good.
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