- Title: The Summer Sprite
- Artist: Aurauri
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Description:
I dance through the forest just out of your sight.
I am the summer time sprite.
I hide in the roses, my defense their thorn's might.
I spread their pollen here and there.
My wings shimmer in the light.
I dance with excitement through the air.
I lead the summer night.
I am the summer time sprite.
I lead a chorus of firefly lights.
I conduct the cricket's song.
I'm the one who mixes the color for the dawn sky.
I make sure there's raise and shine. - Date: 01/18/2009
- Tags: summer sprite green nature
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Comments (7 Comments)
- HayleytheArtist - 01/24/2009
- Aww this is cute! I love the description too. A 5/5! smile
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- Aurauri - 01/21/2009
- Thank you for the advice and all your kind comments.
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- Daxaryn - 01/21/2009
- The green makes it look more spring-like. Maybe a little more orange (for example, Autumn Glory) items would've made it look better? Summer is usually very hot, and there are no signs of heat in this entry. Great job with the description. It's something to be proud of. 4/5
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- Starlight_Sakura - 01/21/2009
- very pretty, great colors and story
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- LunaleeGriffith - 01/21/2009
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I really like u avi ^_^ really good description too~ givin ya 5/5 ^_~
care to vote back? <3 - Report As Spam
- Chronos_numbur_XIII - 01/21/2009
- love the poem! a 5! vote for me too please! "the society of fairy knights"
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