- Title: Relinquished Life
- Artist: Jayara
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Description:
Never again will they rise,
To meet the moon or the skies.
Fallen too far from the heavenly line,
To be saved,
To be redeemed,
To shine.
Time calls,
Seasons fall,
The last breath remains behind.
Does one release their only soul,
To save that of a fading mankind? - Date: 02/01/2009
- Tags: archer moon blue gold angelic
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Jayara - 02/08/2009
- Thank you both of you. ^-^
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- iMistic - 02/07/2009
- I love how you tied the colors together
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- Kishin_Mistress - 02/07/2009
- i love it im puting this on my favs and im one of your fans2any way
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- Jayara - 02/05/2009
- Thanks!
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- Rettalicious - 02/05/2009
- Yeah, I'm usually a fan of a description, but it's a cool poem and could have to do with the thoughts of the avi, so I'll give you 5/5 smile
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- Jayara - 02/03/2009
- Actually, I never really put too much stock into the description for anyone's entry as I figure the judgment of writing is better left for the writing arena. XD Honestly, the poem was a last minute filler as any story I came up with felt like it came up short.
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