- by ll drift ll |
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- | Submitted on 08/03/2009 |
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- Title: whisper of onii
- Artist: ll drift ll
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Description:
in the dark were i live
no murderers no thieves
in the place were i vanished
because everything happening whenever i wish
in night i appear
in the day i disappear
i face the people without a fear
bad weapons is useless like a spear
i - Date: 08/03/2009
- Tags: whisper onii
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Breneko - 09/25/2009
- this looks like one of my avatars from ages ago...
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- HockityPockity - 08/16/2009
- could do without the peotry, but you have a good sense of visual composition with the avatar. i like how you matched the veil and vest
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- Amanda the Panda Queen - 08/14/2009
- poetry culd hav bin betr xP and karasunaki wus rite, more gold needed 3: so close 2 perfection, 4/5
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- Karasunaki - 08/10/2009
- You could use some more of that dark gold spread around the avatar. I love the gothic veil/hakama combination, though. They look great together. Also, your poetry could use some work, but I'm not judging you on that. 3/5
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