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- | Submitted on 11/05/2009 |
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- Title: Midnight Date
- Artist: kissycutie91
- Description: She rised from the dead at midnight to search for her date. You can still hear her say "wear is he?!"
- Date: 11/05/2009
- Tags: midnight date
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Mtoro - 11/15/2009
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NO WAIT.
"You can still hear her wonder"
Okay, typo corrected. XD - Report As Spam
- Mtoro - 11/15/2009
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Let me correct you:
"She rose from the dead at Midnight to search for her date. You can still her wonder, "Where is he?!""
Thank you. You used an item set, so that brings it down to a 3. In the description, she's upset, but the avatar is smiling. That's a 2. And last but not least, she's on the moon. This really doesn't make sense. 1.
1/5. Congratulations. - Report As Spam
- hazul-chan - 11/15/2009
- huh?
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- Rezeda - 11/13/2009
- You need to find more items, not just a set or it makes it look very un original.
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- the_princess_is_here555 - 11/09/2009
- i dont think someone would wear that for a date and the avi is just over done 2/5 sorry
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- iRiceCakes - 11/09/2009
- I like the Story but it's a little Cheap. ;O
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