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- | Submitted on 03/27/2010 |
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- Title: Monster
- Artist: RavenaRayne
- Description: She ran into the night, legs flying even as they changed. Damien's voice got quieter and quieter, and then... silence. She fell to her knees, gasping as her body started to convulse. Hatred leaked into her limbs- hatred and love and pain and betrayal. Damien had changed her into this. He had made her into this. She caught a glimpse of her tail against the moonlight, and she threw her head up, howling with everything she had.
- Date: 03/27/2010
- Tags: monster
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Comments (2 Comments)
- MissRazorRibbon - 04/03/2010
- She doesn't look very monsterous to me. The only "monster" item on the whole avi is the tail. The description was good, but if you're going to call it a monster or a werewolf, whatever, it needs more to it than just that to make it more beastly. Possibly ears? Claws? Anything to make it more than just a person with a furry tail. 2/5
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- Moon Flower Aimie - 03/30/2010
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I was about to dismiss this avi
Until I read the description. o . o!!!! Powerfull.....
I was about to rate a 3, but the description was so good I give it 5. O . O;!! I'd love to see you write a book... - Report As Spam
