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- | Submitted on 04/25/2010 |
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- Title: Outter Flame, Inner Pain
- Artist: A Fitting End
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Description:
Her flame burns bright but inside it's dying
Love left her alone so now she's crying
Her smile will fool you but she's really a mess
The pain of this longing has left her distressed
And what can she do to remove all the pain?
That's right, you've guessed it, burn up in her flame!
A reentry of an old submission but with a few tweaks and a crappy poem... DX - Date: 04/25/2010
- Tags: outter flame inner pain
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Comments (2 Comments)
- E S F I R A - 04/29/2010
- You did an excellent job with the choice of color :]
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- Nyxali - 04/26/2010
- Me likey the tweakins!
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