- Title: That Striped Doll..
- Artist: Uncolored
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Description:
There she lies, that one doll.
Discouraged, she can't ever stand tall.
She lies there, mocked upon.
She may never see the true dawn.
Nobody understands, inside this doll, there's something much more.
Something better you'll only find straight in it's core.
But the outside of her is all that they see.
That forgotten striped doll is all that she can ever be..
- Date: 10/08/2010
- Tags: striped doll discouraged forgotten outcast
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Crackology - 10/16/2010
- I love it. It's like the outside is black, white and cold but the inside is colorful and warm. Great description. I don't think you can add anything seeing as she is supposed to be a doll. 5/5
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- Uncolored - 10/15/2010
- Feather? I don't see a feather.. Thanks for the advice though. I'm not sure what I can use exactly to fix it up. >.<
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- Demonic Dust Bunnie - 10/15/2010
- I see nothing wrong with this one, its lovely!!!!!!!!!
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- Whose Your Llama - 10/15/2010
- The description is great, maybe use a different item for the shirt though. Kottan Bell is more of a dark gray than black and doesn't go well with the rest of the avatar, same for the feather(?) on the hat. All in all it's really good though. 4/5 Rate me back next week please. ^ ^
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