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- Title: New Benevolent Order [Re-entry
- Artist: Raixa_Phantasy
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Description:
"The last few years Gaia has been under S.I.N.
The followers of this new nation has been fully transformed into infernal demons at the last major battle.
We, the warriors of the Overseer, were been treated as dirt, and acted as one in our loss.
Fortunately, in these miserable years of slave work a few of us rise up to the challenge, and our hope multiplied across the globe.
Now, we will draw our blades to pierce through the heart of the sentinels under a new benevolent order. " - Date: 05/07/2011
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Raixa_Phantasy - 05/13/2011
- @Rutilus thanks for answering the shoe question. ^ ^;; I wasn't actually paying attention to the feet when I started it.
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- RutilusDiluculo - 05/13/2011
- I think it might look a little better with more white at the bottom since the only thing bringing white down there is the sword. So maybe try the shoes from Sweet Lunarian? Also, Feet Wraps might help to bring a little of that slightly off-white from the hair to the bottom. It's pretty good though. 3nodding
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- Raixa_Phantasy - 05/13/2011
- @Rayne thanks! Actually, the scarf started the whole "New Benevolent Order" idea. I've been looking for an outfit to fit with the scarf and now ( not really now ) I found it.
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- MeidoGhoul - 05/13/2011
- Very nice! My only critisism is the skarf thing. But I guess that's only cuz I hate now the Gaia skarves always make you look like you don't have a neck. Either way, it's definitely, with the background information, a 5/5 for me.
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- Raixa_Phantasy - 05/13/2011
- @Pacman Thank u! I don't like how the zodiac hair covers the eyes ( same in rl ). Also, what kind of shoes I should go to replace it to make it better?
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- XanAmpersand - 05/12/2011
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Nice. The only two things I can comment on are:
- I don't think the Masquerade bangs are that necessary (it kinda sticks out weird for me) and
- The shoes. They're a bit too dark a color, and thus grab my attention first: totally detracting from the really nice flow. D8 If it were possible to use some different ones, that'd be great! (Maybe some of that Zodical-esque teal to offset the hair?)
All in all, though, I really, really like it. :3 - Report As Spam
- Raixa_Phantasy - 05/07/2011
- The only difference is the hair and eyes.
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