- Title: Queen Esmara - Ruler of Mayuum
- Artist: Toxicoid
- Description: The indigenous tribes of Ni'quoi have been living peacefully in the jungle of Raa for centuries, until an invasion threatens their territory. Outdone by an enemy army of thousands, the fight for what is theirs is not free of great risk. It is up to their highness, Queen Esmara - ruler of the biggest colony, Mayuum - to choose between a raging war, sacrificing the lives of many Ni'quoi, or a colony migration, a basic stand-aside that would allow their land to be surrendered. What will she decide?
- Date: 09/17/2012
- Tags: queen esmara ruler mayuum
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Ensavondel - 09/26/2012
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Some gave this a 2/5? This puts most of my avis to shame!
This is beautiful emotion_kirakira - Report As Spam
- Toxicoid - 09/25/2012
- Well it seems like you are unaware that you have a very small word limit when you post an avatar. Of course, an invented species is complex and takes much more than a small paragraph to fully embrace their meaning and culture. Aliens or not, it's not relevant - what's relevant is that they're a different species, not human, and that's shown through the avatar. A moon and shimmers does not reflect aliens, that's just a poor, pathetic assumption you've just made. Overall, bad review, bad scoring.
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- Hakezu - 09/25/2012
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No where in the description does it say that they're aliens, so why the moon on her hair, or the shimmers that float around her, or the feather that sticks out of her arm?
Also her facial expression doesn't show the concern of the choices she's about to make, and on top of that why is there's a bluish-gray color at the right? It totally sticks out.
Overall the story was eh
and the avatar seems off.
1.5/5, but I'll put 2 since there is no half a star rating. - Report As Spam
- Toxicoid - 09/25/2012
- Thank you! ^^
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- GeekyTanta - 09/25/2012
- a bit busy but like the purple
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- 2_twins in a ball - 09/24/2012
- Long live the queen! yum_puddi
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- Toxicoid - 09/24/2012
- Greetings, Kilroy.
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