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- Title: Ghost School Girl
- Artist: LunarSupernovan_Yuna
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I wanted to make a bit of a disturbing story to go behind the avatar. Enjoy!
There's this... girl. She sits in the back of the class everyday, scribbling away in her little notebook with her bunny plushie lying on the desk. I've never seen her face as she always is looking down focused on that notebook of hers...
Read the rest of the story here:
http://asharaia.blogspot.com/2013/02/disturbing-story.html - Date: 02/09/2013
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- The Garden of Eatin - 02/15/2013
- cutie
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- LunarSupernovan_Yuna - 02/13/2013
- And one more minute detail that I forgot to add to the story; The bunny was supposed to belong to her son. It adds to how she hung onto the thought of being a good mother while at the same time, still being a bit of a child herself.
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- LunarSupernovan_Yuna - 02/13/2013
- I'm a huge fan of emphasis, though. I love using a ton of minor details put together to put together a big picture. Simplicity completely runs out of my mind when I decide to do something creative. It's an immediate second nature for me.
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- Sheryl Lamoureux - 02/13/2013
- Ah, the book and glasses already suggest why she'd be teased, though. Best to keep things simple. Hiding her eyes adds enough creepy.
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- LunarSupernovan_Yuna - 02/13/2013
- I actually decided to add the bunny last minute to emphasize what the girl was teased for and, yes, to make her seem just a little more creepy.
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- Sheryl Lamoureux - 02/13/2013
- Going by archetypes... the bunny doesn't quite belong there. Book and glasses makes a studious look, which seems to be what you're going for, while a bunny makes a more creepy-cute childlike one. For me, it's odd to mix those two types and doesn't quite work in my head... but, you know, your character. Maybe it does make sense. Just that those personalities don't seem compatible.
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