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- | Submitted on 06/08/2014 |
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- Title: Haiku Goddesses: Garden Statue
- Artist: Lady_Eldae
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Description:
bathed in pale moonlight
granite skin glowing anew
a flutter of wings - Date: 06/08/2014
- Tags: haiku goddesses garden statue
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Scot Plank - 06/11/2014
- I also see why TheHardcorePanda mentioned the wings - they do look like an afterthought. This avatar, if you wanted to make it more "alive," needed a lot more brown in it to work. My apologies for this taking up THREE comments, but character limits are an a**.
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- Scot Plank - 06/11/2014
- I've noticed this not just from you, but other regular competitors, that many of you have a formula that you fall into and don't make any attempts to step out of. Maybe this entry is an attempt to break free of that formula, but I'm not seeing it yet as a great start. A bit choppy, if you ask me. It's why I questioned the skin tone choice.
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- Scot Plank - 06/11/2014
- To be quite honest, Lady_Eldae, I've been haunting Avatar Arena for a while, wanting to see if anything I'd make would be up to snuff with many of the entrants I like. I realized that this is not so, but I have an issue with your entry, in that it feels like, while you're trying to give life to that statue and entry, I feel you had a miscarriage in doing so.
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- Lady_Eldae - 06/11/2014
- @Little Dead Soldier: The wings are from the item Vermilion Muse. =)
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- Little Dead Soldier - 06/11/2014
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omgosh! I just love all your entries! I have most added to favorites. *adds another one*
I love how this flows. It's so soft and the wings are just awesome (what are those btw?)
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- Zengoku - 06/09/2014
- Yo! The way that moon is all shining 'n' stuff reminds me of them old disney movies I usta watch as a lil boy. 10/01 just sayin.
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- Lady_Eldae - 06/09/2014
- @Scot Plank: The skin tone I used, Latter Day Caesar, was the closest skintone I could find to the color I was going for. I'm okay with it not being a perfect match because I wanted it to appear like a statue coming to life.
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