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Please don't leave me
Don't walk away from me like nothing is there
Go to my room and see, that I love you
- by Confuzzled Cookies |
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- | Submitted on 04/10/2009 |
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- Title: Please Don't Go
- Artist: Confuzzled Cookies
- Description: a short poem #2
- Date: 04/10/2009
- Tags: short poem
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Confetti_Head_Gore - 06/20/2009
- i like it. it has suspense, detail, and u can vizualize it in ur head as u read it ^^
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- Broken Blind - 05/25/2009
- ya, i agree, this should belong in the poems section
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- Confuzzled Cookies - 04/30/2009
- what's that suppose to mean?
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- Ninth Pariah - 04/27/2009
- It's fairly good for it's length, but belongs in poetry anyway.
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- tyichi - 04/25/2009
- that makes sence. sorta. but i love the shortness after what i just read!
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- Confuzzled Cookies - 04/23/2009
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uh... read the description ppl
short poem..wat do you expect..??
i didnt make this with fawkin effort, made this cuz i was bored (plus a person encouraged me to make another short peom)
and i bet i make a longer poem than you do, Rose
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- dark_elven_vampire - 04/22/2009
- this is horrible
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