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She walked through the halls and kept her head down. She heard the jeers and sneers from the children around her. "What a loser." one said. "Ew. Is it real?" another asked. Tears formed in her eyes. This wasn't just a bad day, this was her worst. Just to make it all better people asked if what she was wearing was real. She nodded sadly. She couldn't get mad at them. Just the others. They were the ones doing this to her. It was thier fault.
"Poor girl." a teacher said softly. "What happened? Was she in an accident?" a child asked aloud. "Yeah, she was burned by a house fire." a boy answered for him. "Oh," the boy said walking towards her. "Did it hurt, miss?" he asked. "Did you almost die?" another asked. She stared at them. "Yeah, it did." she answered dully. Suddenly a boy her age was tired of people staring at her. "Do you wanna go and talk?" he asked.
- Title: Lone
- Artist: ihatechuu
- Description: Haha, I made it crappy on purpose. I don't know how to make a story like this any better, though. I did try, and I hope you don't leave anything bad.
- Date: 07/17/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- vafrous - 07/18/2008
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What happens after? I want more too T-T
So far it's really interesting but those mean students are really really... mean. - Report As Spam
- Ravitacus - 07/17/2008
- What the heck is she wearing?
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- liverbug_returns - 07/17/2008
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Is that it??
I wanna read some more.....
Anyways...
I like the way you write.
You have a way of keeping the readers attention....(or at least thats the way i felt about it)
I have a hard time doing that when I write... - Report As Spam
- prittykid1234 - 07/17/2008
- ooooooooooooooooooooooo! i like the happy ending!
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