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Chapter One**** Breaking Free
The morning sunshine rises from the west and I feel so weak. This is because it’s morning. I’m Aryeanna Melody, just call me Melody. I’m 14 years old. This year is my first day of school in 2016. My step parents like to move and move to other places because my step father works at Halion Parsh Industry. That place is gorgeous but that place is as busy as a bee. Always in a rush and I also hate the workers. They are so impolite to people. Oh, I totally forgot about what’s making move. It’s because the manager there has business running around the country. My step father is the co-op of the manager there, so he is busy as them. I never had a fun time with him. He keeps working. My step mother is a fashion model. She is the Golden Queen of this town. I can’t even have the greatest time with her. She can make me as her doll, wearing the dresses that she loves on me. It’s like I’m her check up girl, looking what’s ugly and beautiful. I always wished that my real parents will treat me better. Well I better get going, there is school to go. “Wow, this school is so beautif…….uck” Oops…. Did I say that out loud? Actually I’ve been pushed by a guy. I didn’t even get to say beautiful. Did he hear what I said just now? I hope not….. “Did you just say ******** at me, didn’t you?” He just did. Huh. This is EMBARASSING!!!! “I’m sorry. I want to say beautiful at this school but you pushed me, so I just said ********. I’m very sorry.” I beg for forgiveness at him. I bow and bow for it. It’s quite funny. “So that’s it. It’s okay and I’m sorry to pushed you just now. I didn’t mean it. I’m Nathan John Wright. Call me Nathan. If you’re quite near to me then call me John. Lastly, if I’m part of your family or you are part of mine, call me Wright.” Nathan is really a charming person. I feel like calling him John already. “I’m Aryeanna Melody. Call me Melody. Have you ever been to Sphera before?” I suddenly ask him something about my place. How stupid. Well past is past. I can’t turn back time. “Sphera……………. I think so. I feel like going there before……… umm…… Yeah I’ve been there. The place there is a wonderful place. Didn’t you know there is a sphera’s heart there?” He ask, “Yes, it’s the one that is keeping the Sphera alive right?” he reply “Yup, but the Sphera’s heart is no longer there. That place has withered for years since 2002. Blah….blah….blah….blah….. *I didn’t listen at that part because I was thinking of that sphere*…. Blah….blah….blah…..blah…..blah……. and sphere is gone.” My tears then started falling “I’m sorry, I got to run. Thanks for your story.” I run towards the school corridor. Why am I crying? Its feel like something or someone is in me, crying. In class I wasn’t paying attention to what the teacher’s teaching. “MELODY!!!! Why are day dreaming in the CLASS? Tell me about what are you thinking about, Miss Jayne?” That teacher just uses my step mother’s name at me. Calling me, Miss Jayne! Let see if she accept her husband local name. “I was day dreaming about your husband local name, Miss Underpants.” Ha-ha-ha-ha I can’t stop laughing. “Melody, how could you? (Embarrassed) You will be in detention right away.” My teacher was blushing. People are laughing so loud. She then says “You ALL will be in detention. Excuse me.” That teacher is quite shy. She runs outside the classroom to the teacher’s toilet room. Well, that is how you mess with me, Melody. Suddenly, something appear right in front of me. It was a flash right in front of me. All the people are closing their eyes. After the flash was gone, I open my eyes. It was a shock. “AHHHHHHHHH…….!!!! Where am I? Where are the others? Anybody here?” suddenly a people appears right in front of my bloody leg. “Are you Melody?” I can’t even speak because it is a boy, a handsome, cute, cool, so blue and so polite. “I…. I…. am….. I mean I am Melody. Who are you and where am I?” I ask eagerly. He replies “I’m Jeremy Butler. I am 20 years old. I am you guardian Soul.” “WHAT THE HELL! No no no. You are totally joking.” I was in a frea…ky situation. “Do I look like a joke to you? (Making a serious face and it’s quite handsome. He-he)” Jeremy says that with no smile but with serious face. “It can’t be. A guardian soul, wait guardian soul! This means that you will be my life!” This is like being in a TV commercial of Freaky FRIDAY! Oh man… “Yes and also I got to follow you everywhere you go. I will be at the age of you and be in a class as you. I can change age as you but I can’t be at the same age as you outside the school. Well that’s it let’s go back to your school. I’ve already register my name at the list so be ready for me. I empty a sit next to you. See you there, Melody.” He just leaves a sit for me and sitting next to a guy that is my guardian soul, Jeremy. The flash came back and then….. I’m back at the class room. When I look at the clock it is in the same time as before. How weird and then the headmaster of the school came in and say something, “Good morning class. I’m in here to greet you a wonderful morning and also *here comes, the part of my life is coming* a new kid is coming to this class. It’s a boy. His name is Jeremy Butler. Here he is Jeremy Buttler…………” People are all standing and there he was standing in front of the class. The girls are all screaming, I don’t understand these girls. I know that he is good looking but it doesn’t mean they can scream. “He will sit beside Melody. Well then good luck on making new friends Jeremy.” The headmaster goes out. Jeremy headed to his sit. “Hi, Melody…...” All the girls stare at me. “(whisper) Jeremy stop it. The girls will go mad at me. You know that I’m the nombor one unpopular girl in school. Well don’t let me get bullied again.” Jeremy noded his head and he pass me a letter. I open the letter and he wrote this for me. He wanted me to go to the rooftop so. I think I can come. At the rooftop I was waiting for him. He then open the door and says “Sorry I’m late. The girl were chasing me around. They are so wild. No wonder they like bullying you. They like good looking people like me.” Jeremy says and I reply “Shut up and tell me what you wanna say.” He says “I wanna tell you about how can I be your guardian soul while others can’t. I made a promise to the queen guardian soul, Hamry Jumanji Canra Badlyiana. She is the powerful Guardian Soul you will ever to meet. I was locked up at a place called Candle Dungeon. They accuse me on murdering someone before I became a guardian. I’ve been killed. After I died, I’ve been whacked by the queen guardian soul’s workers. I said that I will do anything for her. She said that you will have to do this; you will go back to earth and be a guardian soul. I’ve chosen a person for you and that’s Aryeanna Melody. Can you accept my proposition? And I except and on that day I’ve became your guardian soul. I can’t believe that I could get whacked by her workers. I didn’t even kill anybody.” “No wonder you’re that serious. Well I promise that I will protect you so you wouldn’t go to that horrible place anymore. I promise.” He replies “You are confidents, aren’t you? How…….cute (low voice)” He just said that I’m cute, I’m flatter. “Let’s go home. My mother and father are busy so they will go home late. They never check me up in my room so you can sleep in my room.” Jeremy nod and we go home together, just like I said.
- by Strawberry Eri |
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- | Submitted on 08/28/2008 |
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- Title: Endless Heart of Miracle
- Artist: Strawberry Eri
- Description: This is just a novel story I wrote. Its fantasy dudes. This is about a guardian Soul. I hope u like it and its long.
- Date: 08/28/2008
- Tags: endlessheartofmiracle
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Comments (7 Comments)
- RambunctiousPastries - 02/10/2011
- Good story.
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- Lyana Honey - 01/30/2009
- mmm......mmmmm.......i think its a good story
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- `Ramune - 10/09/2008
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You have excellent writing potential! I'm a fellow writer and, seeing how young you are, have the same love I do for writing. You could use some more descriptive words, and try to expand your vocabulary some more. Remember to indent on your paragraphs, that's very important to a reader!
But keep pushing and improving!
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- vayne eye - 08/31/2008
- cerita ni begitu baik.
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- kiminnn - 08/30/2008
- CERITA YANG MENARIK.............................
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- kiminnn - 08/30/2008
- cerita yang manarik.......
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