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Leap into deep pits of despair
Nobody will ******** care
Release at last for this lost soul
In my heart you left a big hole
Because you ripped it out you see
And this is all thats left of me
Burn out and fade away
And let me breath
- by CrispyMilo |
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- | Submitted on 09/10/2008 |
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- Title: All Thats Left
- Artist: CrispyMilo
- Description: i was mad when i wrote this
- Date: 09/10/2008
- Tags: thats left
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Comments (7 Comments)
- CrispyMilo - 09/12/2008
- thnxs
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- cutie5465896 - 09/12/2008
- i luv it lil bro
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- kullotte - 09/12/2008
- i agree with Dokutouzoku. this poem seems very catastrophic...kind of reminds me of wat happend to me...luv it
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- AkariiSaisoko - 09/11/2008
- Ignore the lower comments. They cannot comprehend the ability that has been put to good use in this poem. You were lost. It was tragic. All that's left is an empty shell. Gorgeous poem.
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- p-bumblebee - 09/10/2008
- not cool!!!!
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- anime luver 439 - 09/10/2008
- touching...I love the last line
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- littletiff_xx - 09/10/2008
- i can tel you were mad
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