- Long ago there was a knight named Raze. Raze wanted to be the greatest knight in the whole land. In order to do that he must slay a dragon. So he went to the town blacksmith Hawk and told him to make him a fire sword.Hawk said he needed more materials.So Raze went out to gather more materials.When he returned Hawk forged the sword,The ALL MIGHTY GREAT FIRE SWORD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! scream So then Raze deafeted the bloodthirsty evil dragon and lived happily ever after THE END biggrin
- by Angry lala5 |
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- | Submitted on 10/02/2008 |
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- Title: The Ancient Fre Sword
- Artist: Angry lala5
- Description: The story of how Raze the Knight became a noble and honorable king
- Date: 10/02/2008
- Tags: ancient sword
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Comments (7 Comments)
- gigidoll26 - 10/02/2008
- ehh -_-
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- chaotic_cat13 - 10/02/2008
- ok that makes NO SENSE!
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- Kelecktur - 10/02/2008
- hmm...well it's a good story but I believe you could write more...the story needs more =) It could become an epic...you just need to believe it can be
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- 3x_Night_LiGht_xD - 10/02/2008
- wat the heck was dat
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- Flarith - 10/02/2008
- this story has a good story line but i think u should work on making the story more descriptive and enteresting. AKA; More action lol
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- kelly ann ball - 10/02/2008
- that story could use more details about Raze
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- allicatbug - 10/02/2008
- that story sucked
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