New angle of death

• Artist: NeverBornPain
• Description: [url=http://tektek.org/avatar/19625533][img]http://public2.tektek.org/img/av/0810/d03/1838/422021.png[/img][/url] [url=http://tektek.org/avatar/19623938][img]http://public2.tektek.org/img/av/0810/d03/1756/80106.png[/img][/url] [url=http://tektek.org/avatar/19591086][img]http://public2.tektek.org/img/av/0810/d02/1644/e05a24.png[/img][/url]
• Date: 10/03/2008
• Tags: angle death

after a deadly heart atack my bodey changed i had to ware a bio mask i almost dided but i made a packed with death i am now the new angle of death - my storey plz donate its a edit bugining to a manga gess ppl dont like it ps i barly looked bak so ya im gona mis spell

Comments

[iPandaChan99]

....Um...I Can't Really Understand....I Agree With " Kyoot Emerald Sanity - " And 0/5 ( Very Sorry )

[KeatonNinja]

>_>... deadly heart attack? Bio mask? Okay then.

[queffers10]

lol u did misspell and it was stupid 2 beg for money, that makes ppl not want 2 rate ur story very high. I know what writing is and im srry but ur just not that good. take ur time and im sure when u get inspired you'll be great

[bro mo dat chi]

I am sorry, but you SUCK at writing.

[eternalXheart]

hey!don't be mean 2 him at least he HAS courge to make an entry !

[Wei Hui]

What the hell is this? First up, your spelling is terrible. There are mistakes almost everywhere in the sentance. Secondly, a sentance cannot be considered a proper story. Thirdly, you didn't bother with any explanations or anything. This is more like a premise for a story then anything else. And finally, this is the writers arena. You come here to WRITE. This is not a charity, so you do not beg.