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His eyes deep,
Deeper than blood flowing through my veins.
Eyes more beautiful than a Ruby,
Shinning in the morning light.
His eyes stopped me dead in my tracks, as if they were hypnotizing me, pulling me into a crimson tide. I couldn’t turn away from his pale, handsome features. Ruby clashed with Ocean Blue, in an endless battle of silence. He smirked in my direction, causing a red hue to come over my face. Finally able to brake his hypnotizing gaze, I turned and walked away into the rode, my mind hazed, clouded, and fuzzy. I was so flustered I didn’t notice a truck coming dead at me, and not until I looked up did I notice the fast moving car. I stood there and put my hands up to my face, for some sort of protection. I waited and waited, time moving slowly as I awaited for my fate. I heard a crash and looked up. There in front of me was him, that boy from the parking lot that made me so flustered, he had some how gotten me down on the ground, and his hands were blocking the car from coming any closer to me. I stared in amazement. The car had a deep dent in it. I looked into his beautiful eyes, looking for some sort of answer, some sort of explanation. All I found was guilt, and remorse. Before I could say anything, he took off running in a desperate chance to get away. Who is he? I wondered staring at the spot he was standing in not 5 seconds ago.
- by PunkSk8rEmi16 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 11/19/2008 |
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- Title: Crimson Tide
- Artist: PunkSk8rEmi16
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- Date: 11/19/2008
- Tags: crimson tide
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Comments (4 Comments)
- mrzblack7 - 01/24/2009
- i like it, i mean, just look at my username lol XD
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- CristaXxLoveYouXx - 11/30/2008
- awesome this is a sooooo great dtory i agree w/ Via write more!!!!!!! =^_^=
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- i-Roisin Dubh-i - 11/30/2008
- Is this based off of Twilight? If not, it's remarkably similar.
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- Via890 - 11/29/2008
- Very good intro of a story! You are truly talented in writing. Please, write more. ;P
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