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The second chapter to the original, Death is no joke. This is a link to it: http://www.gaiaonline.com/arena/writing/fiction/vote/?entry_id=100410509
I just stood there. I wasn't quite sure what to do. After all, I was only 10 years old. What was I to do? I searched through my father's pocket, warm drips of tears trickling down my cheek, and found his cellphone. Quickly, well, atleast as quickly as I could, I dialed 911. My hands quivering, I put the phone to my ear, swallowing before a warm voice on the other end said,
"Hello?" I paused for a few seconds.
"Are you there?" the voice on the other end said, with the smallest hint of impatience. Slowly, I stuttered out,
"My parents...dead..." And I broke out into tears. Unexpected, and unstoppable now.
"Where?" the voice on the end said urgently, but not in a way that made me feel as though he really cared about the fact that my mother and father were dead. I looked around, and there, right in front of me, a sign readind "Eastwood Bllvd."
"E-east...Eastwood...Bullivard." I don't know what I sounded like. I could hardly make out what I just said myself. But they seemed to understand, because immediately I was hung up on. I didn't know what to think about all this. I had so many feelings, feelings of mourn, feelings of sadness, feelings of anger, feelings of frustration. And, I think above all, revenge. And suddenly, I felt tired. I dropped the cellphone I collapsed, resting my head on my father. There I lay, on the road. The last thing I remember from last night...was the blaring ambulence and police sirens coming my way. Then I fell asleep.
To Be Continued...
- by BeaniesFTW |
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- | Submitted on 11/22/2008 |
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- Title: Part 2-Death is no joke
- Artist: BeaniesFTW
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Yes, I know. Batman. Ok. Well, by the end of the story, it won't be like Batman. You just have to trust me.
Anyway, yes, I know this is a pretty crappy chapter. Nothing special about it. Really, I'm just wrapping up the beginning scene.
Please rate and comment. Constructive critisism is fine, and I welcome that, but no negative comments, including swearing. - Date: 11/22/2008
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Stitchesof_Rosestems - 04/22/2009
- make links to the other continuing chapters so if someones reading they can continue easily
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- Stitchesof_Rosestems - 04/22/2009
- still good
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- BeaniesFTW - 11/28/2008
- thanks, again. i like the encouragment.
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- zXTrueGamerXz - 11/27/2008
- still awsome
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