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As I wake up from my bed there where light flashes coming from window pain,and in the distance a hazy red glow. My fears where coming to life when I saw a terrorist R.P.G gust through parking way .
I ran down to the family room to warn my Apa,but it was all ready to late. They had him in a corner....I was ingulfed in fear.
"What should I do" I thought. "If I try to save him they kill me"
"If I dont may kill Apa"
In a cowerdly regret I run in my room.
"What was that Orev" one terrorist said in a Dark scratchy voice.
"I'll go check Ali"
I heard foot steps across the hall. I ran under bed thinking they wouldn't. The man had a red head band and mid night back slacks on.
His eyes where skwinting with hate but yet fear. He was about three feet away from me. I didn't understaand how he couldnt here my breath in a such heavy pase.
"Know ones here Orev" The man said.
"Alright Come one know letes take this pig to the station" Orev said.
I heard the door slam....I ran outside with the Riffle form Apa's room , but it was too late the R.P.G was long gone.
As I wake up from my bed there where light flashes coming from window pain,and in the distance a hazy red glow. My fears where coming to life when I saw a terrorist R.P.G gust through parking way .
I ran down to the family room to warn my Apa,but it was all ready to late. They had him in a corner....I was ingulfed in fear.
"What should I do" I thought. "If I try to save him they kill me"
"If I dont may kill Apa"
In a cowerdly regret I run in my room.
"What was that Orev" one terrorist said in a Dark scratchy voice.
"I'll go check Ali"
I heard foot steps across the hall. I ran under bed thinking they wouldn't. The man had a red head band and mid night back slacks on.
His eyes where skwinting with hate but yet fear. He was about three feet away from me. I didn't understaand how he couldnt here my breath in a such heavy pase.
"Know ones here Orev" The man said.
"Alright Come one know letes take this pig to the station" Orev said.
I heard the door slam....I ran outside with the Riffle form Apa's room , but it was too late the R.P.G was long gone.
The next morning Im awoke from the empty tavern in the back of the
house just relizing what happened.
"Im going to kill who ever took Apa" I grunted in greaf and pain.
Soon later i had to go to school. When I was walking down the tile alley way people where looking at me in such a manor I have.
"Is every thing okay" I asked Sarenia
"No Tiziyon Every thing is not okay" she said in a quiet tone.
"There was a insadent last night some terrorist took my family"
Right then i relized that I wasn't the only one that had this problem.
"Ya the same thing happend to me to"
"You okay Sarenia"
She had tears in her eye that glimered in the sun light. She wrapped her arms around me and started breathing heavy.
"Why would they do this to us Tiziyon why?"
"I dont know,but what i know is that there not going to get away with it!"
"They already did"
Where going to take back our freedom.
"What do you mean?"
"I mean where going to fight tell we win!" Of corse she thought i was being to cintamental like usual.
Later that day the teachers and half the students where missing. I was worried that they were taken away as well. We all had no need for school today so the princable told us to leave. When i was heading home a fire ball blew into the sky and gun shots started fireing.
Suddenly Matthew ran up to me and said "Tiziyon there here again!
"Who is" I said in fear and panic.
"The people who came here last night" "This time they have more men and more weapons" We started heading into the cotton feilds.
Exsplosions where near by I could feal the heat. In the corner of my eye I saw a hudge truck drive through a fence that was heading right for us.
We tried to run, but it was already to late. They pulled in front of us. 5 men came out with Riffles and granades.
"Take theese rustic bastards to the Gaza" I tall man said. The man had baggy gray pants with a red T-shirt.
"But sir if we tack them there there will be no more room bacuace of the other hostages?" another man said in a nassley voice.
"Who said there will be hostages." I was in fear that they will kill Matthew and I.
They grabed Matthew and I and throw us in the back of the old rugged truck.
"We will get of of this Tiziyon." Matthew grumbeld."Trust me when they least expect it well make a run for it."
"Dont be soo sure about that little one." A tall man said in a erry tone. The man was wearing a red turban and a long brown coat.
Matthew just glared at him with his black eyes that glimered in the sunlight.
"Pretty soon are people are going to find out where you are and there going to kill you" Matthew smiled.
"Trust me little one we already took care of your people"
"What does he mean by that" I thought to myself. Later on that morning we reached a hold volselity, it was in the middle of the desert. There was nothing really there just all broken up clay and tents. I knew the tents were not for us any ways. When we reached the parking area a tall man aprouched my side.
- Title: Dust in Israel
- Artist: Tiziyon
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Description:
This is not the full story but its part of it,
A boy named Tiziyon who gets abducted by terrorist with his friend Matthew.
p.s Im not the best speller in the world becuase I just learned English soo please dont cemment saying a word is misspelled - Date: 12/16/2008
- Tags: tiziyon israel
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Sebastian the Ferret - 03/19/2010
- i started reading it, but it was too vague i think. I agree with dragonrider, it needs more detail
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- Mon Amour Antoinette - 04/20/2009
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i didn't know you had stuff in the arenas =O
this was a good story, good job ^o^ - Report As Spam
- dragonrider435 - 04/12/2009
- It's pretty good, but I think it lacks detail. I couldn't really picture the characters or the setting. I could picture the house, but that was it really. All in all, a good plot, but I think you need to add some stuff to it.
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- KKslider33 - 12/20/2008
- great story
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- LolitaDawnChan - 12/16/2008
- that was a good story 5/5 ^.^
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