my last rain

• Artist: xoxo_lollipop_icetea_xoxo
• Description: this is an old story of mine but i think its cute and i just wanna see what you people of gaia think.
  
  
  ~luvs~
  
  jojo/jordo
• Date: 12/16/2008
• Tags: last rain cancer xoxolollipopiceteaxoxo

i sat in my hostpital bed as the rain pattered against my window.my life was soon going to be over and i knew it.my heart was giveing up on me.a couple of weeks ago i had found out i had heart cancer.the doctors couldnt stop it and it just kept getting worse.today was to be my last.slowly i moved my feet to the floor and walked out.there was one thing i wanted to do before i left.i wanted to feel the rain.outside i jumped around in the soggy grass.for once in a long time i felt free and completely alive.like everything was fine and tomorrow i would wake up to a brand new day.all of a sudden my heart started to slow down.it was time.i lied down in the wet grass with my arms outstretched and closed my eyes.as the rain fell down on my smileing face i slowly faded away.

Comments

[elegantmovement]

So touching! It's awesome!

[naxxar]

It made me cry

[winipepsi]

Jojo I friggen love this! Its my favorite of all the stuff you have written! I remember the first time you read it to me how I was speechless! Bravo~! Bravo~!
4.9999999999/5
;D

[OMG its Becky1107]

i liked this story alot because my cousin died of cancer and im glad someone is at least writing about it i give it a 100/100