boomerang

• Artist: FoxWhisper
• Description: this is another of my hycoons and i hope you like it.
• Date: 12/24/2008
• Tags: boomarang

Boomerangs are fast.
So fast you can hurt your self.
So be careful kids.

Comments

[Hekibel]

... Don't you mean haikus?

While your syllables are right, you technically aren't following the style. Usually they are based around nature, and deal with time or issues concerning us. Also, drop out the "useless" syllables like "so" and "they" and "a" since they usually act as fillers or just clog up the haiku.

[jsonnia_94]

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