• "big brother!!!" 8 year old chie's noice filled the cave causing a loud echo. her 17 year old brother yoske was on his way to save her from the tall shadow. yoske had no idea where he was going. he held his sword close to his chest. "im comming for you chie" yoske began to run hearing a loud clang sound he stoped seing a monster charging toward him. he stood there and swung his sword across cutting the monster in half and began to run. he heard his sister crying and opened a door "big brother you here" yoske looked around he saw his sister was tied down and there was no one else in the room he swings his sword cutting the ropes and hugs her. she hugs him back and her eyes light up red.... to be continued if i get enough comments