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She held onto his arms as she cried of sorrow. She had her long,silk hair in the way so no one would see her cry." Y-you cant go!," she burst out. He grabbed her back and held her tight. He lay from his hospital bed with a white medical suit on. "My only daughter, please, go onto looking after you mom and,please, don't cry," he said. "You cant!," she screamed out, "I will never let you pass on! Never!" The doctors came and pulled her out and took her to the waiting room.
She sat their crying and crying until they called her in for the terrible news. She had to be pulled away to the car by the doctors. She sat in the car, not thinking but just sitting there. Her mom sat in the back seat as the car was drived by a doctor. Her mom, crying more than she was, was laying her head on her lap. "Lexie, please, take your brother to the police and tell them about the poisoning," said her mom. Lexie nodded her head and layed her hear on the seat comforter. She thought of the good times with her father.
One good time was when she went fishing and caught a huge fish."Now put it back in," he said. She looked confused "why?"Her dad sat down as Lexie did. "Because stealing a life is like stealing from a store. For example, what if you saw a really cool doll, and you put it on reserve. What if another girl steals it?," he said. "I would cry," she replied. "Well thats how the fishes family would feel to," he said. She put the fish back in the water. "Now can i have my doll?," she asked. They both laughed.
She came back to reality and found the doctor carrying her mom inside. She went inside to and found her brother, David, crying on the floor. "David, do you think dad would want you to cry?," she said as she wiped David tears away. "No," he replied. He got up and said ,"carry me." She picked him up and carried him to his spider man bed. She yawned and layed in her pink bed. She cuddled up. Before she went to bed, she looked at the picture of her dad and said,"night,dad."
- by ihatenoobs23451 |
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- | Submitted on 02/15/2009 |
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- Title: lexie part 1
- Artist: ihatenoobs23451
- Description: PLZ TRY NOT TO COMMET AND SAY "O THIS STORY SUCKS" OR "MAN THIS IS VOMIT" OR SOMETHING LIKE "YOU ARE MEAN AND STUPID" PLZ SAY WHAT YOU THINK AND TELL ME IF YOU WANT LEXIE PART 2
- Date: 02/15/2009
- Tags: lexie part
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Comments (6 Comments)
- Risa F - 07/10/2009
- Soooo good!! Sad, but good! Plz make a part 2!!
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- riaishott - 02/21/2009
- vERY USAL . a DUFFRENT KIND OF STORY AWSO MEE LEXI 2 LEXI 2
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- silverdust_hearts - 02/20/2009
- AWW! Now that was a good story. A little short and simple, but good. You might want to change the word "medical" in one of the first paragraphs because it makes it sound like the father is a doctor and I got confused. Try "hospital gown" or clothes, whatever you like.
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- SugarC0ma - 02/15/2009
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Omy this is so touching, sad, and yet so brilliantly written.
I think you and I should be writing buddies.
5/5 sweetie.
I'm sorry something like this had to happen to you.
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- ihatenoobs23451 - 02/15/2009
- sry i made it really sad sad ya it did
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- Crystal Glennwood - 02/15/2009
- This is very sad. Did something like this happened to you?
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