Maxomighty...

• Artist: Tyoshi Kitty
• Description: Part 5! Hope ya like it!!!!! :3
• Date: 03/31/2009
• Tags: maxomighty

I promise to Protect you Ria. I said. Thank you, Max, I truly am grateful, but
what if you do get hurt? I dont want anybody I care about getting hurt....
Shes said sadly. As long as you dont get hurt ill be ok. smile During the walk the sun started to set and while Max and Ria were walking:
Oh.... Ria looks tired.... I thought to myself. Um hey Ria. I said calmly.
Yes? Shes said. Wanna take a little break? You look tired....Oh... um...
sure, want to sit over at that field? She asked. Sure i see a soda machine
over there, would you like anything to drink? I asked. Sure. Ok be right back.
As Max walks to the soda vendor he notices somebody in a black coat,
in a corner looking at Ria. That cant be good.... I said. Max walks over to Ria
with the Sodas watching what the man in black is going to do. Hey Ria...
Yes? She said holding her soda. I think were being watched... we need to go...
i think hes waiting until it gets darker out... comon. I said silently. Ok. Shes said
scared. Dont look around for him or else he will know we are on to him... You walk
ahead ill make sure he doesnt try anything... Ok be careful. She said. I promise. We
are almost home. Its getting cloudy again... and darker.... Ria we need to hurry up
its going to rain... I said concerned. Ok... As we ran we notice that the man in black
was out of sight. Great, we got hom just before the storm! biggrin I said. Thats good to
hear, im feeling tired Ria said yawning. Ok ill show you our extra room.
As we enter the house, Tyoshi is sleeping on the couch.Hi guys, were home. I said.
Is he alright? Ria asked worried. Yea hes been through worse. xd I said. Thats
good. I hear footsteps. Hello Max welcome back. Oh hi Grandpa. This is Ria.
Shes going to be staying with us for a while. I said. Sounds great. I can show you
to your room... uh, where are your things? He asked. Oh she... uh.... forgot them
at her old house. Oh then you me and Max will go shopping tomorrow. Uncle said.
Thank you very much. This could be fun after all. :3 i did wanna get a new shirt i
guess.... sweatdrop Ok, ill show you to your room Ria. You must be tired.............

To Be Continued!

Comments

[pu3 dayana]

use quotation marks pls.i can't really understand the story without it.

[JHaley]

Or, to note that somebody's speaking, you could use quotation marks, so that I won't accidentally read it as part of a paragraph that isn't dialog.

[DarkenBloodx]

You should make a new.. what's it called... paragraph every time there's a new talker. If you get me. Sometimes it's hard to tell who is who talking.

[xxx_monster_in_ur_headxxx]

Its really great!

[Tyoshi Kitty]

XD Part uh.... 5 i think? o_o
I Hope ya like it! mrgreen