- The one girl who no one loved came back to school no one cared that I had been gone for a long time people started to make rumors that my parents beat me and I was ashamed of my scars when I walked into the school gates boys laughed at me some threw things at me. running to get to class I was late again. "why are you late again sira your ten minuts late!" the teacher said writting a demarite for me"I-I was thrown in a trash can""LIES thats another demerite!!!" the teacher says "now take your seat so we can get started""ok" I say weakly taking my seat alone in the back of the room. No one knew were i came form so they hated me. staring out the window i thought of my life back were i came from my real name was forest and i was alone and even hear im alone. I wasnt paying atenition to the time so when i awoke the bell wrang and i bolted out the door. The day went by supper slow but befor i knew it the day was over. I walked home in a world of silence not knowing that i was being followed. Then i herd someone laugh i spun to see who it was and there was the same boy who threw the book at me last month. 'Ha so you thought that you could go home and not care about being followed"he said walking to me i knew he was going to hit me so when he lifted his hand i ducked it flew right over my head. I droped my things and hit back i got him right in the stomach i knew that was the wrong thing to do and i regreted it. I left him with a bloody nose and rant the rest of he way home. That night i desided im going to run away no one will care. so as i packed my things to go i thought of were i could go. I made shure my parents were asleep befor i left. when they were asleep i snuck out not shure were i was going in the dark i ran. Untile i came to a lake i didnt stop running i flung my self on the shore and rested till i fell asleep. When morining came i didnt want to wake up but the smell of somthing cooking woke me up i followed the smell and found a boy proboly a year older than me. "he-hello" i say to him his head flung around to see who was there "hey what are you doing out this early?" he said to me. "I-I dont kn-know". "well come over hear and warm up k" he says pointing to a spot next to him "y-you dont hate m-me" i say looking at him strangly. "why the heck would i hate you for?" "w-well every one hates me" "why would every one hate you?' he asked. "I-i d-dont know". "well i dont hate you now come sill and warm up k" "k" i say sitting next to him "whats your name?' he askes looking at me "for- sira whats yours" i say to him "my names soma nice to meet you" 'hehe" i laughted "do you want some fish?' he asked me 'shure' he hands you a fish on a stick. We talk all throu the morning. By the time noon came we were walking through the forest . "so why are you out hear anyway soma" i ask bummping his arm. "well i ran away from my family cous they hated me so hear i am" "i ran away too'' i say to him. "wanna be run aways together" he askes. "y-yes!!" i say hugging him "oh- im sorry' i say backing away " i wont do i again"."its ok".Its bin five days sence i ran away and i love it. But when im around soma i feel funny like iv known him forever..and i want to kiss him. while we were walking on the path i looked at him mabie i should show him who i realy am i tought. "hey soma can i show you somthing?'' "shure what is it" i set my bag down i bring my necklas out and kiss it "wha-' somas face changes when i turn into the most beautiful fairy hes ever seen.'y-your so beautiful"he says walking closer to me."d-do you still like me?' "i like you more know" I felt the blush comming on. "your even beautifuler when you blush" he says comming even closer. "well what do we do now?' i ask "well you could be mine forever" as he said forever he swoops down and kisses me on the lips. It was like heaven when our lips locked together. His toung explored my mouth as if to clame it. His hands wrapped around my waist and went lower and grabbed. I never new what a kiss was like so this was the best. after a while we broke apart and started walking again. We grew up together and got married and lived the life we wanted even though i am fairy he loves me and i love him.
- by retsuelover12 |
- | Submitted on 04/08/2009 |
- Title: lost and alone
- Artist: retsuelover12
- Date: 04/08/2009
- Tags: lost alone
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Comments (4 Comments)
- BuckyKattLove - 07/30/2012
- The story is OK. However, I agree with all of the points Autumn-Crystal brought out. Most of your story consists of run-on sentences. I like that it had a happy ending. ^^
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- jungle elf - 05/08/2009
- umm well...how to say this..its not very good.
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- Autumn-Crystal - 04/17/2009
I have a list of critiques, and I apologize if they offend you in anyway.
1) Check your spelling.
2) Grammar is important, check that too.
3) Paragraphs were created for a reason, create a break for each new line of thought.
Again, I apologize if these offend you, but they were glaringly obvious problems.
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- TrixieLoveRose19 - 04/08/2009
- OMG! Supper awsome! I thought you'd add Retsue in the story not Chase. Commpletely unexpected! Great story,I think that it's probebly better than mine!XD
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