- There was a boy named Thomas who just moved from Sarasota and is moving into an old and stinky house.He met a guy at school named George and was friends with him.He was metting him after school so George can go to his house.They went into his backyard and thought it looked abnormal.They went to school the next day and started talking in a space where no one goes to.They both wondered why and carried on with there sentence.When out of no where a guy named Frank came out of the darkness and said"Do you guys want to do a pray to the demon gods?They said "No and who are you?"he talked them into praying.They all felt tingley inside and just then the bell rang.When George and Thomas where walking home out of the now where they heard a whisper and then George was pushed to the floor and got up and ran.He cried and ran to get away from Thomas.When he arrived home he went straight for the backyard.He saw a ghost when she said"Dont be affraid i wont hurt you...yet...>=("Thomas ran straight into a black hole when everything turned dark and scary.He whimmpered and scurried around.When Brooke the ghost came out of the fire and attacked Thomas.He ran out of the black hole but,Brooke couldnt let go of him so she followed him to his house when he got so scared he...Hung himself from a tree.He left a note that said"Dear George sorry if you thought i pushed you and Mom and Dad i loved you so much and i trust you... so can you give this note that is sealed by this one and give it to my friend Frank but be careful and dont open it and give it to him A.S.A.P.The next day Frank recived his letter and he opened it and he got sucked in the hole..Thats the last anybody heard of Thomas and Frank..........THE END..UNTIL MY NEXT STORY..
- by danielle1026 |
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- | Submitted on 05/30/2009 |
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- Title: THE GHOST NAMED BROOKE
- Artist: danielle1026
- Description: There was a boy named Thomas and he met a guy named George they prayed and got mad at each other and Thomas saw a ghost who took him to a dark hole and tried to atack him.he got so scared and hung himself and gave his friend a note that sucked him in a black hole...read the rest
- Date: 05/30/2009
- Tags: scary stalking creepy
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- kyongane - 06/02/2009
- lmao
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- _xx ii sh-ay ii xx_ - 05/30/2009
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hahah so funny jk lolz what a loser lol jk hi smile
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