Alone Forever

• Artist: Herosolidox23
• Description: This is my first poem so don't judge me please and plz tell me wat u think XD
• Date: 06/11/2009
• Tags: alone forever

One time, I was all alone. Nothing to do. No one to hug. Just sitting in my room all day talking to myself, in shock with what i just saw eek . My wife, my kids, my entire family, including my parents all murdered in front of me as i looked though the window. They were killed by this, this devil of some sort evil . He didn't kill me, but i wish he did so I could Be with my whole family. But now, now im stuck here all alone. Alone Forever

Comments

[alio06]

Err...it's great for a first poem. (:
But try to make the reader think next time. Don't just narrate it, or else it'll look like a really short story. ;D

[prettycaity2]

Also If Meh Other Comment Showed Up >.<
Um,... You Can Check Out My Poems And Meh One Story If You Want To Know How To Do Somethings....LEAVE COMMENTS THANK YOU smile

[prettycaity2]

Wrong Topic D:
This Should Be In Poetry And Lyrics....Also Should Be In Poem Format....So Yeah Keep On Writing >.<

[gabbwee2]

Um i think itshouldbe i a poem format, but it is really good! very good actually. wish i could right poems, i can't i only write stories.