the zodiac shinobi

• Artist: Lonely-mitus
• Description: this is a story i am writing ,the first time sumiting anything sorry i cant spell i just want to know if its any good .it the beging of my story oh shujin means head of household and shimai means sister hope u like it
  oh its play style sorry thats how i write it
• Date: 06/24/2009
• Tags: zodiac shinobi

Tatsu-(walked in a tatmi floor room and sits on her knees and bows down) yes shujin-dono
Rei-call all the members of the zodiac Tatsu-chan
Tatsu-right away shujin-dono(she stands and leves the room to call the members of the zodiac and comes back and sits on her knees and bows)they are coming(they come and sit down on there knees)
Rei-tthank you Tatsu-chan
Tatsu-your wecome
Saru-why have you called us? (geting mad)
Tora-be quite saru-senpai
ineshish-ok go on shujin-dono
Rei-thank you everyone for coming on short notice but the takeshi's are starting up mayhem it is best to be on your toes
everyone-yes shujin-dono
Rei-everyone is dissmissed!(everyine leves the room)
Tatsu-lalala(walking down the hall)
Tora-ummmm...shimai-san what are you doing? (titlts head)
Tatsu-AHH! shimai-san you scared me what do u want ?
Tora-i asked what were u doing
Tatsu-oh,i am takeing this green tea to shujin-dono

Comments

[ii_fAwK_wHoReS_ii]

wat??

[Kohoru]

Hmm it's interesting i like Great job Renjiro san!!!!!!

[mitus]

hee hee i think it's cool ane san