- Each passing day, the hunger gets worse. I am far from civilzation but even that does not turn the nightmares. even i sleep here in my temporary camp in the forest, i can hear a bell tolling. the call to hunt is beginning to be too much, but i cannot die. i must feed, but what shall i hunt? animal blood is to thin for me, human blood is nesscary but where can i get a human in this forest? hurggg...the call is driving me mad, insane. its already been several months now, but now my sanity is breaking down like the berlin wall. wait, what was that? oh just a bear. animals know to leave me alone, but where shall i go? i have no map and i have terrible sense of direction. what? whos there? oh a bear? what the? did the bear just talk to me? i must be going crazy..the bear is telling me to hop on his back, he'll take me to the nearest human. i do that, on the way there, i forget that bears arent meant to be ridden, you can feel every muscle that moves. its not like a horse. i arrive on the edge of a human camp. i thank the bear, he trudges off into the forest to pick berrys. i see there are two beds but there is only one human at the fire. the other one must be relieveing himself or herself. im not sure. it doesnt matter, im too hungry to think about that. the one in the camp is too exposed, i'll find the other one. after sneaking around the camp for a bit i find him, he is behind a tree taking a smoke. i guess the one in camp doesnt like his smoke, i reach around the tree and stifle his objective mumbles. i then puncture my teeth into his neck, blood suddenly rushes into my system, i can feel the color coming back to my skin. oh at long last the hunger has been calmed....
- by BloodSilverStranger |
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- | Submitted on 07/08/2009 |
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- Title: The Hunger
- Artist: BloodSilverStranger
- Description: a hunter of the night is going mad from hunger for the thirst. he must find a source of food before the sun comes up in a forest.
- Date: 07/08/2009
- Tags: hunger
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Spaikai - 07/29/2009
- cool writing
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- demongurl8822 - 07/17/2009
- wow i really like this piece and i'd like to read more of it
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- Jackie Tekila - 07/12/2009
- I like this one better than your other piece. I just have the same advice as before, watch your capitalizing and skim through with a spell check. I was actually very intrigued by this piece. It has a good flow to it that has a sense of urgency that keeps your eyeballs moving. Good work!
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- vanzchecz - 07/09/2009
- preety good
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