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I hated my parents at this point. My dad, because he just had to leave us. He was always a great father; playing catch with me (even though I was a short bouncing girl), having a great job at a fancy corporation but still coming home with so much time for myself and Janet (mom). But then, when my mother found out she was pregnant again, he left without a note. At first my mother begged for him to come back for me, or for the baby to come. He refused. Apparently, now he was in Vegas with his slutty girlfriend (Shelby).
I hated my mother because she wanted to leave this house full of memories. Don't get me wrong, I felt terribly for my mother. After my father left I could feel she was in pain every day. There wasn't a night where I didn't hear her crying herself to sleep. It didn't take me long to realize that she was cutting herself.
One rainy day in the middle of the winter, I felt as if I needed to do something about this problem instead of watching my mother be degraded to nothing.
"Why don't we move, mom?" I suggested in my small squeak I had required from the loss of my father. She gave me a small sigh in response and as she thought, tear rolled down her cheeks.
- by missing charlotte |
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- | Submitted on 07/24/2009 |
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- Title: don't know what to name it
- Artist: missing charlotte
- Description: I have been told for a long time that my writing is A - class, so...This is something off the top of my head.
- Date: 07/24/2009
- Tags: dont know name
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Comments (2 Comments)
- The Photogenic Frenchfry - 09/04/2009
- Pretty good, but it would be a lot better if it had more detail.
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- Luffypirate - 07/25/2009
- Good story considering how short it is. Just something that bugged me, though, is the fact you named Shelby. Unless you intend on going on with the story, there really wasn't a reason to name her, especially in the way you did it. Besides that, though, better than I could probably do.
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