- Sara walked out of the summer home that her family went to every winter. She didn’t know why her parents made her and her brother do weird things like this. As she walked around, the cold assaulted her senses, making her shiver even though she had three jackets on with a long-sleeve shirt. The smell of pumpkin pie became fainter as she wandered farther from the house. The smell of pine replacing it and the homey smell she was so used to when they came to this cabin. Sara made her way to the clearing she always went to, to forget her problems and just relax. She looked around the clearing where she could see squirrels and owls and hawks resting in whatever part of the tree they could. Sara started getting a little bit warmer as the sun shone on this beautiful clearing. She sat against a tree and slowly dozed off, letting the wind and soft chirping of birds and the scurrying of tiny animals trying to find food in this cold lullaby her.
- by Sphynxy-Ookami Goddess |
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- | Submitted on 09/26/2009 |
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- Title: Winter Day
- Artist: Sphynxy-Ookami Goddess
- Description: Just a description of a surrounding area according to a character and such. Please tell me what you think.
- Date: 09/26/2009
- Tags: surroundings winter fiction description animals
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- redstrawberries47 - 10/04/2009
- Don't think of me as a grammar/spelling freak, but I saw a couple mistakes in there... however, other than that it was very descriptive, letting us paint a picture in our minds.
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