Screams in the night

• Artist: Twisted_mind16
• Description: Jack was cold;scared; broken; His thoughts twisted and turned around in his head. He was going into a form of unstoppable insainty that he could not stop...The cold stale air bit at his frail weak body...He effortlessly tryed to break free of the chains holding him to the dirty wet ground but he could not do it.He would die in this prision, this small, run-down cage of puke and sh*it.
  He heard footsteps...Getting closer... closer...
  
  The moment was finally coming.
• Date: 10/03/2009
• Tags: screams night

Just wondering what the feedback would be. wink

Comments

[blackmagic2005]

You wrote the story in the wrong place, the description go's in the description box, your story go's in the bigger box that looks like the ting you would type in when replying to a thread or pm....D:<

[Sila Calien]

uh u know tat the description goes in the DESCRIPTION box and the story goes in the BIG box....... >>