Something Special(Intro)

• Artist: xX-CUPPICAKE-Xx
• Description: I was bored one day and just began to write ^^
  My frineds all love this story I'm writing and I hope you do too.
  I have about two chapters I need to type up right away ^^
  Enjoy!
  (I know it's short but the chapters are a bit longer. This is just the beginning.)
• Date: 10/09/2009
• Tags: something specialprolog

Most girls my age aren't under scientists' surveillance. Most girls don't know what their going to do when and while the grow up. Most girls don't even work. Life for the ordinary has always been easy and simple. No one truly thinks about the extraordinary things around them. They may not show themselves, to an older crowd. But to the young children they are as real as the sky is blue. These extraordinary creatures, are afraid. Afraid of being shunned. Hurt. Or worse, killed. Many would not dare venture to say that they have traveled to world of humans. Sadly I can say I have. Most girls aren't stuck with huge choices. One so huge it could end in the death of the world and life as we know it. I'm not most of those girls and if you haven't already figured ti out, I've got to make a choice. But I'm getting to ahead of myself. Why don't I start from the beginning. Maybe it will make more sense.

Comments

[firefox228]

"I'm not most of those girls and if you haven't already figured ti out, I've got to make a choice. But I'm getting to ahead of myself. Why don't I start from the beginning. Maybe it will make more sense." Personaly, i rly dont like those sentances. its like calling someone up on the fone and saying "i'm calling you. i'm gona talk to you. i'm gona talk to u about..." dont do it. come up with something that sticks with the mood of the story. the rest i'd give a 5/5