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Lust before Love huh?
Vincent came out of the limo he rented for the night with useless (a puppy for those who do not know) in his arms with another puppy in his other, he could hear his heartbeat on his ear, he gulped and hoped that the female puppy (no name yet) with a ribbon around her neck, that Elvi will accept her, (he plans to give the puppy to Elvi) the puppy is fluffier then useless and has a lighter color than him, useless has taken a liking to the female puppy, Vincent smiles to himself and knocks on Elvi's door.
Prom night,
Elvi's house
7:30pm
Elvi opened the door and her breath left her lungs, she mentally fanned herself, hoo hot stuff, it took her awhile to notice that he was gaping at her and he held two dogs in his arms, she suddenly felt self-conscious, but stopped when she saw desire burn in his eyes, and she smiled that all those hours trying to find a dress paid off, the dress is white that flowed down an inch or two from the ground, around her chest was black with designs of black flowers and butterflies, the dress was also strapless, she also carried a small beaded black bag for emergencies that held her cell and emergency money,
"Hey, Vincent" she waved her hand in front of his face before he sputtered and blushed slightly.
"Oh, uh Im sorry, its just that, your so beautiful" he said his eyes feasting on her. she felt herself flush.
"Thanks" she said shyly. And looked pointedly at the puppies.
"Are those yours?" she asked pointing at them.
"Huh oh yea" he held out the one with a ribbon at her and she took it in her arms, the puppy sniffed her fingers and licked them, Elvi giggled at the ticklish sensation, and suddenly imagine Vincent pulling her fingers into his delicious mouth and suck on them, Elvi blinked and shook her head.
"They're cute, especially this one" she said, trying to hide her discomfort.
"Oh," he smiled, the tease "She's for you" he said
Elvi blinked and looked down at the puppy now panting and lolling her tongue.
"You mean she's mine?" Elvi asked, just to make sure.
"Yea, I haven't named her yet though" he said.
hmmm, Elvi thought, "Angel?" she asked the puppy and the puppy responded with a pout, Elvi giggled and thought again. "Shy?" the puppy jumped in agreement "Then shy it is!"
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Vincent look at Elvi in an amused expression. He loves seeing Elvi getting excited and happy, he felt his own naked joy just by seeing her each day, he always felt something in his chest and felt it growing each time he saw her, he wished it was love, but he knew if it was, it'll only hurt her, he knew that in a week he'll be gone and have to go back to California, to finish his studies there, he tried to argue with his parents but to no avail, he suddenly felt a twinge of regret and guilt.
He shouldn't have asked her out, he shouldn't have kissed her, he didn't want to hurt her when he leaves, he couldn't bear seeing her hurt, but, he does love her, and he knew it was selfish of him to take her to the prom knowing it would only hurt them both, but, he already asked her and done all that, he closed his eyes and prayed that she doesn't love him, even though he knows he'll get hurt, he just cant stand seeing her getting hurt too.
- by winterwolf212 |
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- | Submitted on 10/23/2009 |
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- Title: chapter 6 =D of my love story
- Artist: winterwolf212
- Description: yea yea, >.> theyre too young so i broke them up a few years, =D OH s**t, i submit it to non-fiction O.O
- Date: 10/23/2009
- Tags: chapter love story
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ii-MidnightAngel-ii - 10/23/2009
- theres a couple speeling errors and capitalization errors but still awesome 5/5 (im not 1 of the people that take off for errors)
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- winterwolf212 - 10/23/2009
- comment me for corrections! ill change them right away =D
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