Falling into Darkness

• Artist: Poisoned by Pandas
• Description: Well this is my first entry in the writing forum. There are flaws in the writing. Comments and ratings are appreciated.
• Date: 11/29/2009
• Tags: falling into darkness

Blessing tapped her foot, annoyed of waiting for Tyler to show up. Blessing licked her fangs wanting to go into the park and drink from them the couples who walk through the park at night. Just as Blessing looked up at the full moon she heard Tyler's voice saying "Hey Blessing!". Blessing looked to see Tyler running from the dark corner of Magnolia Drive.
After three seconds of saying that, Tyler was at Blessing's side because of his speed talent. He ran track when we went to high school and his speed increased when we were bit at an after party. Blessing black hair fell in front of her face, she brushed it out of her face and then said to Tyler "You are late. Also what happened to my next two months of freedom?". Tyler sighed and then answered "I know I'm late and one mission before you go have your two months of freedom."

Blessing walked into the five star Fortaine Hotel. Blessing wondered why in the world Tyler wanted her to go knock out a vampire hunter and bring the guy to him. Blessing was careful not to go near any mirrors. Blessing decided to go get a drink at the bar before going along with this. She sat on bar stool and said "Grey Goose please". A guy then sat next to her and said "Put it on my tab". The guy had brown hair that went to mid neck. He also had blue eyes like the ocean compared to Blessing's ice blue eyes. Blessing muttered "Thanks" the guy replied "No problem, may I ask what is your name?" Blessing sighed and then said "Blessing, you?". The guy smirked and answered "You'll find out soon vampire"....

~To Be Continued~

Comments

[Poisoned by Pandas]

thank you, i had really just thought this up in a few minutes. Thanks for the tip also I'll use more shes and hers in the next part.

[bigguy138]

Well I think you're off to a good start. Needs a bit more before you can get any good comments. Try to cut down on the number of times you refer to Blessing as Blessing. More shes and hers. But you've intrigued me so you're on the right track! Try writing some more for this!