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Once in a land far way there was a princess named Melody she wore white, green, blue, purple, pink, yellow, orange and any other color besides black then the day before the ball a knight came up to Princess Melody.....
"Princess Melody a package for you milady." The princess walked slowly towards the knight and wrapped he dainty fingers around it's leather skin "Thank you knight" the knight bowed and walked away the princess walk up the tall stairs to her bedroom she opened the package inside it was a book it had a black leather cover and in red thread "The Dark Book" is sown she opens the book hesitantly as soon as the black leather cover is opened a swarm of black dust and smoke encased her the dust choked her and she passed out when she awoke she was in a black dress in front of the large mirror in her bedroom her hair covered in black hair clips she felt different she was shocked that when she tried to change the dress wouldn't come off then she touched the dark book her dress changed she sigh she went about her day but things she didn't mean to say came out when little Timmy the tailors son tried to offer her an apple "no i don't want an apple you incompetent little brat" Timmy went away crying and the princess was confused she tried to say "no thank you Timmy" .......
- by Dark Rose Bella |
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- | Submitted on 12/28/2009 |
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- Title: The Dark Book part 1
- Artist: Dark Rose Bella
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a beautiful princess receives a tan leather package in it is a book it has a black leather cover and in red thread "The Dark Book" is sown read the story to see how it changed her
from the writer of the 3 part poem Her Unexpected Prince - Date: 12/28/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- charbookwyrm - 01/17/2010
- This is a cool idea. You need to work on your style...more frequent punctuation and paragraphing would make it easier to read, and you need to be careful that you don't mix up tenses. It looks like a great story though so keep going with it. 3.5/5
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- Timecraze - 01/09/2010
- thats some inexperianced writing but its awesome! 5/5 rate mine in return please
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