the kiss of death

• Artist: erikloverno_1
• Description: this is the end of one of my going to be books. tell me if you like it. i think its kind of ruff.
• Date: 01/17/2010
• Tags: kiss death

“Who are you?” I could barly keep my voce above a wisper. It was so much, so much to take in at once. This was the one, the one who had been in my room for the last 3 months. The one I had dreamed about being with forever and ever. Now he sat besid me. His tall legs where crossed and his hands in mine.
“ you know me. You know everything about me. This is it, you can chose to be with me or without me. It is your dission.” I shook off all the fear and focused. Was it time to go. I had nown I was not like anyone else, but was this taking it too far? I felt the answer deep inside of me no. all of a sudden, I relized the notes and the neckless was him. It was all him. He had told me about his life, it was in the poems.
“ I love you.” I told him. Only one tear exsaped my eyes and it fell between us. I took the neckles out of my pocet. As I put it around my neck I felt him. His presiens was all around me. I had felt that deep in my heart. I loved him. What more could I ask for but a enternity with him. That was all I wanted, and we would figer the rest out.
“this is just the begening my love.” Then he kissed me and my world felt complet.

Comments

[lovelithiar3]

even though i havent read the whole thing exept this i know its going to be good ......i dont really care about punctuation im kind of lazy myself as long s you keep writing

[sweetie12434]

Try to spell things right. Correct punctuation, too. Aside from that, nice job.

[PoisonousMoonlight]

Yes that wasn't spell checked what I wrote I was being lazy

[PoisonousMoonlight]

Spell check deary. and lemme see umm it's confusing cuz I didn't read all of it because it's just this