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Snow lightly falls on the surface of a glistening pond. Only two people stand alone in the cold winter night air.
Atysia: (sighs at the sight of snow) And so the sinfull snow lightly falls among our lands, prepare is all I say to take on this darkness.
Zysn: (Wraps his arms around Atysia, letting her hair fall into his face) This darkness isn't so bad. Once again, a light in the distance kept me alive to find this. The snow is a symbol of fate.
Atysia: (Whispers) And what of this fate? Our hearts are lost within these lies of hope and fate. The winter winds will take away our light.
Zysn: The winter winds bring the northern light along with soft downfalls of snow. (Backs away from Atysia) Even a heart as cold as yours can see that!
Atysia: (In a raised voice) A frozen heart is easily shattered by heat or being tossed aside, think of this when you are alone in this dark winter!
Zysn: My fears are at the least of my heart shattering (sigh). (In a caring voice) A warm heart is soft and will not let itself be easily tossed aside.
Atysia: Easily tossed away? It is not controlled by one heart alone. It truely does take two to create a heart such as mine.
Zysn: I would willingly let my heart fall into your cold velvet sky, only in hopes that some type of star will appear...I can hope...
Atysia: Do you idolize your life? My velvet skies are so dark and cold, no form of light or heat can bring it to life...it's a waste of a life...
Zysn: (Hands back around Atysia's waist, this time looking into her cold dark eyes.) A waste? For one such as you, it is well worth millions of lives, let my kindness show you the choices you should make, listin love!
Atysia: A love? You would throw away life for one such as me? My actions would leave you a lonely, cold-hearted boy, once a lover! (Keeps a straight face and no emotion in her eyes.)
Zysn: A lover, ma'am do I have to spell out words for you? I am here always here to stay with you ni the cold night. (Looks at Atysia with caring eyes and holds her gently.)
Atysia: Years of sorrow are bound to follow. Spare your life and forget about my heart and cool spring nights of velvet skies...
Zysn: Let your cold nights in your velvet skie freeze us in time. (Moves in for a kiss.) I would give anything to be frozen with you until the end! (Gently kisses Atysia, snow glistening around them.)
Atysia: (Quickly backs away, taking steps away from Zysn while cursing) The sun will never kiss our lives again. Your beautiful colors of black feathers will be forgotten in the soulless dark night.
Zysn: (Calmly walks to her.) Then let it be. (Kisses her again, this time Atysia kisses back)
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- Title: Sinful Debate scene 1
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Description:
Kind of like a play write, I never really finished it all the way, it's between two characters. The first one is a girl and she is evil but she wants to be good to match the second one which is a guy who is good, trying to be evil to match her. Atysia~girl, Zysn~boy
Time period: Modern
Clothing: T-shirts jackets blue jeans, etc.
I know their language seems a bit odd for modern, but it's a twist kind of, I want lots of comments let them be bad or good, I want a lot of advice back! - Date: 03/05/2010
- Tags: sinful debate
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- kitharion - 04/02/2010
- i love it. i wouldn't change anything, but u mite wanna go through with spell check ^^ 5/5
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