My heart! Is gone

• Artist: X_X_LALA_Miss
• Description: Eric, has lost his heart. He feels no love. feels nothing beat inside him. Were his heart use to be... was taken away by some mad man !! Hes very hot looking but... he doesn't feel emotions... like everyone else. He is searching for his heart.
• Date: 11/21/2010
• Tags: heart

Introduction!
Eric has been searching for 5 years for his heart. this mad man wore a gold mask. It was the day his girlfriend had died from a car accident. He was sadden from it. He couldn't bear to love again. so he asked the devil himself, to take his heart away from him. He told him he didn't want to feel happy, sad, and especially love. The devil looked at him and instead of killing him and taking his heart, it just took his heart and let him live without a heart.

.....too be continued!

Comments

[SilentMourn]

Surely it'd be more realistic to take his soul? That'd leave him with no emotions, it's more interesting if you see it as a soul. Taking his heart would leave him either dead or weird.. it wouldn't take his emotions. With alot my details and descriptive features this'd be good.. work on it some more. (:

[Irenex3]

Sorry but this mad man wore a gold mask? Details please! Too should be to. Also intro is too short and this story has been mentioned somewhere else. Not exactly but the whole planning of the story.