~*`Spoiled brats`*~

• Artist: MadHatHuntress
• Description: It's about Spoiled kids wanting so much and yet they don't see the best gift is the gift of friendship.
  I was watching the first movie of Harry Potter and saw the scene of Dudley wanting even more gifts and so I thought of this poem.
  
• Date: 11/08/2008
• Tags: spoiled brats friendship

On kids Birthday and Christmas, when they get the gifts, they yell out for more.

Spoiled brats they are.

They get excited for the presents and scream for more.

Spoiled brats they were.

When they get everything they wanted, they still want more.

Such spoiled brats.

They think getting gifts is the best thing. They thought they had everything they could buy, but there is something you could never buy.
The best gift you could ever get is Friendship.

Comments

[Lady ShadowGrace]

King Geek, I do believe the word is 'Truthiness'.

[Digital Witness]

So true. When did kids become so materialistic?

[thomlina]

i agree.i live with one.

[King Geek]

so true.so full of...um...trueiness.

[Zinnee]

I kinda agree with Beth, but I do love your poem just how it is! It really touches what outsiders see when they look down on those coddled little children. (yes, coddle is a word! and a fun one!)

[b0oMB0x-h3av3n09-43v3r]

ya spoiled little kids,
they make me mad
lolz 5/5

[Beth Turner]

I think this could be expanded even further- keep working on it and see what develops. Remember to use imagery and rhyme.