world of ours

• Artist: xxpimpxx227
• Description: this is a song a made up
• Date: 12/01/2008
• Tags: world

"everyone we know"
This is a world you live or die it's not your choice it's how the world is you may never know whats coming at you it may be death it may be joy but every one we know may not always live neither will we we live in our world a peaceful or rather not state or country your choice my the environment how you would like it influence other to do bad or rong its your life live it now choose your path to heaven or you know where.

Comments

[lesbian lizards]

I didn't really understand it because there weren't any periods.
Also, it doesn't really seem to flow as a song. If you hit "enter" after each sentance, or after each phrase, it would make more sense. It just kind of sounds like you're rambling.

[King Exseada]

ya know we sometimes say it's not our choice, but i think it is. i choose to live life as a healer and some one to just show this hate'n world a little love when it needs it. my name "Jason":means healer and i'm born on valentines. so i take in thought that i'm a healer and i must show love.

[lolartist01]

Something about life. I couldn't read it because there were no periods. So it is like this where there are no periods so you can't understand where the sentence ends or where to pause. On the contrary, I think there are situations where you can chose whether you live or die.