High School Life

• Artist: Admiin Office Faq
• Description: This is a story of a boy named Ryuki Azawa a 13 year old who just became high school will he have a great high school or not.
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: high school life

It was fun being an elementary but i'm already high school,its my first day and i dont know why can i see peoples name confused .Then i bump into a girl named Lily Lowee i was surprise burning_eyes she's like a beautiful flower.I had a crush on her heart heart heart and then a guy came up he knows lily lowee i became mad stressed stressed .Then the bell ring the class is gonna start and i'm sad but when i came to our room i was delighted i saw lily and then i smile lol
She laugh at me and i laugh too.Then when it was lunch i told her if i can go eat lunch with her
she said Yes i was super happy 4laugh blaugh .Then when i was eating lunch with her i told her if she like eating hotdog then she said dont said that word to me i hate it and i have been shocked wahmbulance wahmbulance .Then it was afternoon i saw her coming home i told her sorry for saying that word she said its ok i should be the one saying sorry the she smile and she was super cute i smile to her too thats my first day of high school life see ya.

Comments

[CRM96]

Try putting a 'd' on the end of words that need one. I really don't understand any of it, some boy went to school, he saw a girl and liked her, he asked her to lunch and she said not to say that word....what word?! It wasn't really a story.

[Spiraling_into_oblivion]

Needs better flow of sentences.
These would be what we call "dead" sentences, they don't really paint a picture. Be more descriptive.

[jakekumori]

HEy dude this is awesome very awesome