A dead man..

• Artist: XDIm _A_DorkXD
• Description: about an FBI agent who has to solve a case in a matter of a week. but what she doesn't know is this mission may take her very life
• Date: 04/21/2009
• Tags: dead

Tore sat in her office looking at the screen for the millionth time making sure she hadn't missed anything. she had a week to figure out this case and get it to the FBI or all hope of finding the person responsible would be lost. taking a sip from her coffee Tore looked at the screen again. it was late and she was tired of looking at the gruesome blood spread through out the down town library. All she knew was that it had been a man,who was another story all together. Taking a sip of coffee tore smacked the keyboard out of frustration knocking it to the floor. picking it back up she looked at the screen and what she saw horrified her.. To be continued

Comments

[Annastaysia]

maybe make the parts a little longer? all three could fit into one entry, although i guess i can understand why you'd want to have the suspense build. it makes it hard to find all three parts and some people will read the later ones before reading the first.

[XDIm _A_DorkXD]

any ideas on how i can in prove my story?