Cold as Christmas

• Artist: Chocobo feather 16
• Description: You will see...
• Date: 11/11/2009
• Tags: christmas

-IN MY LIFE

Walking in the street in a Christmas day.My heart tells me everything is going to be ok.The holiday music on every corner,and the smell of candy in the air.I just dint realise how awsome is Christmas.IN my way back home.In my desperated feeling to be with mom.A men with a black coat stoped me.He told me he was dead because of me...i just was freak out.With the knife in his hand i just dint realise how cold is Christmas and how cruel is the world.He stabbed me with no mercy.As i was falling down i ws triying to realise who was him.I was kinda in a limbo when suddenly i woke up.Ge,it was a very bad dream.But i realise that Christmas is just another day.A single day where you can just die or spend the nigth with gifts in your confortable home.

Comments

[Chocobo feather 16]

Jesus, i cant believe i wrote this! and my grammar is horrible! OMG hahaha

[DeniHazelnut]

I have to agree with the comment that says that Christmas is another day, but it holds a very special meaning. The thing is that people are the ones who had changed its meaning by just giving importance to the decorations, gifts and parties. Christmas is more than that.
Anyway, just a recommendation for further writings, try not to use simple sentences a lot. Please, dont be like Stepenie Meyer biggrin