• Hello, fellow Gaians. I have a question and I'd like your opinion.

    Long ago, I started posting a story called Lovely War here on the writing arenas. Now, this story, I wrote it when I was eleven and thus it has many spelling errors and the way the story is narrated is in 3rd person, as if I were storytelling it to you and that's not how it's supposed to go. Because of that, I discontinued it: because the story was a physical wreck, an editors worst nightmare. So I left that unfinished file lying on my computer and found it once again recently. As I reread what I had so far and compared it to my other stories, I realized that this was probably the best story I've ever written (Concerning the plot of course) and decided to continue it but as I did, one half of the story was horribly told while the other was masterpiece (Sort of but much better) with a great difference between them. I thought of rewriting the whole story but I had already written up to chapter 12 or maybe even more and it would've taken like forever to do that. So my question is, should I keep submitting the chapters I had already written and haven't submitted plus the new, rebuild ones I wrote or should I just officially discontinue it?

    If you have no idea as to what Lovely War is, swing by my gallery and read it if you wish. Note: My gallery is a mess. I have a lot of submissions so look carefully for the right chapters and good luck reading them.

    Please leave a comment regarding what I should do with this story:
    CONTINUE IT!!!! or TERMINATE!!!!