- Shouts ring out from between the apple trees, the shouts of four siblings romping through the orchard. Two girls and two boys run wildly around and between the trunks, brandishing what seem like sticks but are in reality swords, bows, and daggers. If you were to go closer, you might be able to hear the children yelling in what are supposedly British accents. And if you were brave enough to venture even closer into the vicinity of such warriors, you'd be able to hear their heroic battle cry and the calling out of the names “Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy” over again as they battled foes who dared try to take over their kingdom.
- by Echowindsong |
- Non Fiction
- | Submitted on 09/07/2010 |
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- Title: Double-World Pevensies
- Artist: Echowindsong
- Description: The introductory paragraph about a paper about me and my cousins. I was really proud of this first paragraph, so I decided to post.
- Date: 09/07/2010
- Tags: doubleworld pevensies
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- s5ud - 09/16/2010
- Cool! That is really good!
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- Echowindsong - 09/12/2010
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yeah, i know. i explained that in the second paragraph, but i cut that out and forgot to explain it here... i'll fix that.
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- Metallicamayhem - 09/11/2010
- "Three girls and a boy run wildly.... Peter, Susan, Edmund, and Lucy"
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